The Dress
What makes a girl feel more like a princess than a new frilly summer dress?
A short visual novel about a young woman on a summer day.
It can be completed within 3 - 5 minutes.
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Created in about 6 days for Narrative Driven Jam #2
Theme: Unreliable Narrator I No additional themes were used
Results: Ranked #3 !! Thank you!
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Credits:
Written and illustrated by myself
Created with Ren'py 7.3
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Let me know what you think!
Feel free to leave feedback in the comments and rate the game based on
your experience to help me improve my upcoming visual novel projects.
Comments
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This is such a pleasant game! the music and graphics are very relaxing, and the story is simple, but also spoken from the heart. I forgot how easy it is to just speak from experience. I too had to go out and buy some things while my parents was out too. This reminded me that I don't need to overthink everything when writing. So thank you for the lesson!
I could notice what was going on since almost the beggining, It was an awesome game, I am really glad I played it, and as a creator, you did an beautiful job.
Thank you so much!
You REALLY know how to make unique games
Thanks a bunch!
good game very sad :(
Thank you and sorry : (
Wow! I am very impressed you posted my game on youtube! Thank you so much for that and thank you so much for the nice words as well!!
Of course, even if you are a amateur on this, you did a pretty good game right here, I also might visit your other game that you posted today ;)
Yes, they are trans. Look at the trigger warning.
ohhh i keep skipping the trigger warning
how many endings are there?
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There are two endings! One true ending and a bad ending (all other options)
A slice of life story that focus on the reality of life for many transgender, and even people from the pride community. Highlights how transgender people on times have to choose to abandon the joy of life for their own safety.
Oh wow!! I did not think anyone would record a video! thank you!
That's truly an interesting ideia overall.
For something made in six days, it shines a lot.
My experience was really good and i liked the touch to use Ren'py's web tool since it is a shorter game.
I loved the use of slowly moving the backgrounds to support the lack of rendered characters at the center of the screen!
Though yeah, since it didn't have so much time to be made, the bad ending feels a bit out of place and doesn't feel like some sort of punishment for the choices made by the player.
Great job!
Thank you so much! I will keep the feedback in mind for improvement!!
I really like this it was sweet but very relatable I didn't realise when I clicked on this that it was going to be about a girl like me going through a day very similar to one I myself have experienced.
I did find it interesting that by making the choices I made I was able to get the "true" ending, but that doesn't mean I haven't also experienced bad days like in the bad ending too.
A lovely game/novel I enjoyed it immensely.
I am so glad you liked it! thank you!